Goosebumps stories part 10 : Kuntilanak Deathly Shrieking

            In the bus station, Jane is carrying her bags to the bus while holding the bus ticket, “Excuse me, this bus will take direction to Semarang?” ask Jane to assistant driver. “Oh… yes. Allow me carrying your bags” said the assistant driver while put the Jane’s bags into baggage. “This is my ticket” said Jane. “I will show your chair.” said the assistant driver” said the assistant driver while showing the chair to Jane. “This is your chair, Miss” said the assistant driver again to Jane. “Thank you” said Jane. “We will leave in the couple minute again” said the assistant driver. Jane is sitting beside with the old woman, “Hi…!” accost Jane to the old woman. “Hi… how are you?” said the old woman. “I’m fine” said Jane. “Oh… I’m sorry. I’m not introduce myself, my name is Kathryn.” said Kathryn. “I’m Jane” said Jane to Kathryn. “And how about your pregnancy?” ask Kathryn. “Its three months already” said Jane again. Meanwhile that, a new passengers are comes into the bus. “Okay… ladies and gentlemen we will leave now” said the driver.

            After leaving from the bus station, the bus is going to Semarang. And in the bus, the assistant driver is giving some snack to the passengers. “This is for you” said the assistant driver. Suddenly, “Your husband is a lucky man. I’m sure you going to Semarang want to visit your parent in law” said Kathryn to Jane. “Yes, he is a lucky man…” said Jane while cross mind about the relationship between Jane and her lucky man. In her remembrance, Jane have some conflict with her boyfriend, “Mike, I want to tell something to you” said Jane. “Me too…” said Mike. “I’m going to married, Jane. But not with you…” said Mike. “What…?” ask Jane in surprise. “I’m sorry, Jane. My married was arranged by my parent” said Mike. “You supposed to not accepted, you can refuse your parent arranged and how about me?” said Jane. “I’m sorry, Jane. You must forget me and maybe you can find another man probably he is the right for you or you can…” said Mike without continue because Jane said something and make Mike tarried stiffly. “I’m pregnant…. I’m pregnant, Mike” said Jane. “I don’t believe you… how…?” said Mike in surprise. “This is my proof” said Jane while showing the pregnancy test to Mike and the result is positive. “I can’t… I can’t… You should abort your pregnancy” said Mike. “What? Are you crazy? This is your child, Mike?” said Jane. “Oh… no! this is not what I expectation. Oh… Here… here… this is my money, you can pay for the bill of abortion process” said Mike while grabbing the money from his wallet. “Are you crazy? I don’t want your money. And what I want is your responsibility” said Jane while slapping to Mike’s cheek. Suddenly, Jane’s remembrance is disturbed when Kathryn call Jane’s name, “Jane… we just arrive our first stop” said Kathryn. At the same time, Jane fills with tears. “Are you crying?” said Kathryn. “Oh… I’m just miss my parent” said Jane. “Oh… please don’t cry, so let’s we going to grab something in the store” said Kathryn. Then both of them go down from the bus and to the restaurant to lunch.

            “Better you sit down because you can’t walk any longer” said Kathryn to Jane when she looks the condition of Jane. “Oh… Yeah” said Jane. “What do you want to your lunch?” ask Kathryn. “Buy me a chicken soup. This is the money” said Jane while she gives the money to Kathryn. “Oh… no. I treat you” said Kathryn again. Meanwhile Kathryn but the chicken soup and her lunch, Jane is sit down reflectively in one of the dining table. Suddenly, she flashes upon about her mother. In her remembrances, “How could you do this?” said Mother. “Mom, I’m sorry” said Jane. “What happened to you, it is a shame for our family. I embarrassed to have a daughter like you” said Mother. “Mom, don’t say that. Please forgive me” said Jane again. “Get out from my house. Get out!” Mother’s shrieking. “Mom, don’t! I begging you please don’t” Jane’s begging to her mother when her mother goes to Jane’s wardrobe and put out Jane cloths and grabs the suitcase. “Mom, don’t do this to me” Jane’s begging to her mother but her mother still don’t want to listen the begging of her daughter. Until in the front door, Jane’s Mother is throwing out the cloths and the suitcase. “You aren’t my daughter anymore. Get out from my house and don’t come back to this house anymore” Mother’s shrieking to Jane. With the heartbroken, Jane leaving her mother with the sorrow. At the same time, Jane is shed the tears and she is wiping with her handkerchief, and then Kathryn come back with the chicken soup and her lunch, fried rice. “What wrong, Honey?” ask Kathryn. “It’s nothing, it just a dust come into my eyes” said Jane. “I don’t know what happened with you but I know you had got tough condition. You will be alright” said Kathryn. “This is your order. Do you know what, when I want to buy my lunch, I must to get make line with another customer like bread line. It’s seemed like ordinary fried rice but some people here said this fried rice is awesome so I tried and…. Wow… its true” said Kathryn while she eating her lunch. “And how about your chicken soup?”ask Kathryn. “Hmm… well, it’s delicious too” said Jane while eating her lunch. And then, they are eating their lunch and other passengers of the bus also eating in the restaurant

            Suddenly, their focus on to their lunch is disturbing with the young couple is kissing on the public. “Look at them, their behavior is impolitely” said Kathryn. “Don’t do that, I shame right now” said the young girl to the young guy is kissing her neck. But the young guy didn’t care a pin what the people look to them. “I don’t care honey, as long as I can show you and the world, how is deep my love to you?” said the young guy to his girlfriend. “Really? But don’t do that on the public because the people are look at us right now” said the young girl. “Hey… people! I love so much with this girl more than I have so I don’t care what you are thinking right now!” the young guy’s yelling. Suddenly one of passenger is yelling to them, “Get the room” said the old man from the back. “Oh… thanks for your suggestion, Old man” the young guy’s yelling. “So immoral” said Kathryn. But Jane look the young couple is seem like what was happened between her and Mike. “Let get room, honey. Thank for your suggestion by the way” said the young guy to his girlfriend to leaving from the restaurant. “If my daughter does that, I will chuck them out of” said Kathryn to Jane. And Jane looks like in surprise. “You should do same way if your get birth the child. We must train them to respect to their parent and their attitude” said Kathryn to Jane. Suddenly, assistant driver said to the passengers, “To all the passengers, we will continue our destination in couple minutes again so prepare your stuff or if you want buy something, its better you buy now because we aren’t stop to another place again” said the assistant driver to all passengers. Then, “Shall we?” said Kathryn. “Okay” said Jane while she prepares her stuff and put in it to her handbag. After that, Kathryn and Jane are wanted to come in to the bus; Jane got the phone call from privet number and she picked up the phone, “Hello?” said Jane but doesn’t get any response from the caller. “Hello, who is there?” ask Jane again. But still not get any response from the caller so Jane rings off the phone. “What wrong, Jane?” ask Kathryn. “I don’t know… maybe wrong number?” said Jane while come in to the bus. After that, the all passengers are come in the bus but suddenly young couple is hurried come into the bus, “Wait… Wait!” said young guy. “Where are you have been?” ask assistant driver. “It’s not your business” said young guy while go to their chair. After that, the driver starts the engine and continues to their destination.

            One route, Jane get another phone call, “Hello, who is this?” said Jane. “Jane, it’s me your Daddy” said Daddy. Seemingly that privet number is Jane’s father. “Daddy, where are you been?” said Jane. “I’m in Semarang” said Daddy. “So is it true what mom told me, you are in Semarang” said Jane. “Yes, is it true” said Daddy. “But why?” ask Jane. “It’s not nice talk about that on the phone; I will pick you up on the bus station. Jane… How are you?” said Daddy. “I’m fine and how about you?” said Jane. “I fine too. Your mom told me everything about you, don’t worry, honey” said Daddy. “I hope so…” said Jane. “Jane, I see you in the bus station, Okay?” said Daddy again while ring off the phone. “Okay Daddy and… thanks” said Jane while ring off the phone. “Who is it?” ask Kathryn. “It’s my father. Its long story” said Jane. “I’m understood about that, be patience and be strong” said Kathryn.

            On the Jane’s phone showing the clock around, 22.30 fm, while she holding her phone and the destination to Semarang seemingly still far. Along the way up to Semarang, the heavy jungle are both of side right and left and “I think the driver is diving in wrong direction, isn’t?” ask Jane to Kathryn but seemingly, Kathryn is sleeping. And then, Jane look around inside the bus, the all passengers are sleeping. Suddenly on the window, appear the woman figure and it make Jane is saucer eyed, “Ha…. Who is that?” said Jane. Cause of that, Kathryn is waking up, “What happened?” ask Kathryn to Jane. “I saw a woman is standing the window” said Jane. “Maybe you’re tired, better you get some sleep” said Kathryn again. Suddenly, Jane see the woman is appear on the front the bus, “Watch out!” Jane’s yelling to the driver. Because of that, the driver is press the brake suddenly but the woman’s body is emerging and come to inside the bus and come to Jane. Cause of that, Jane frightened out of with the appearance just want to come near to her. “Ahhhhh…. Ah…….” Jane’s screaming. Screaming of Jane is getting louder because the appearance is holding Jane’s stomach and feeling the inside. Suddenly the bus fall down with a crash and hit several of trees and all of the passenger are screaming and felt the dreadfully ill. And the bus is still roll over and over until in the deep of ravine, the bus is stop roll over.

            In the deep of ravine, all passengers are unconsciously. And some of them are throw out from the bus and inside the bus have some few passengers are still in the bus but have major injured including Jane. “Oh… no! my baby! Oh… God! Please don’t take my Baby” Jane’s groaning while she see on her foot is bleeding and suddenly Kathryn is wake up from her unconscious and tried to help Jane, “Oh… No! Jane! Hello somebody help us… help” said Kathryn when she holding Jane’s body. Suddenly some passengers are wake and have minor injured tried to help Jane. “Bring her out” said Kathryn said to some men are helping Jane to walk out from the bus. Meanwhile that, Kathryn tried to help to some passengers are still live and got minor injured to come out from the bus including assistant and driver of the bus. “Honey, are you okay?” ask the young guy to his girlfriend. “Auch… my leg! It’s broken leg” said the young girl to her boyfriend. And then young guy set a leg with a piece of the cloth is ripped and some bar of iron of chair. But unwittingly, tank of oil is leaking. “Oh… No! Have anyone still in the bus?” Kathryn’s yelling from the outside of the bus when she looks the leakage. “Yeah… we are still stuck in here, help us” the young guy’s begging to Kathryn. And then, Kathryn come into the bus again and tried to help them with support to lean on her shoulder. From the inside of the bus, Kathryn still hearing Jean’s groaning about her baby and some people tried to give her composure. “Oh… No My baby is gone” said Jane. “No… your baby is still there and you can feel that” said the old woman when she holding Jane’s hand to Jane’s stomach and tried to felt the baby from outside.

            Meanwhile, Kathryn and the young couple are still to try to come out from the bus. Suddenly, “Please help me” said the young child is stuck her foot between the chairs. “You go first” said Kathryn to the young couple and then young couple is come out the bus without Kathryn. And Kathryn still tried to help young child is stuck her foot in the between the chairs but the leakage are spread to the cable of electric is broken and the fire just ignited then the bus is explode and burning, which is Kathryn and young child are still in there. “Oh… No!!!” Jane’s screaming when she looking to the bus and Kathryn is still in there. “Oh… Kathryn!” Jane’s groaning. “It’s better to us to find the place” said the young guy. And then all passengers are still live and get minor injured preparing to find the safety place.

            After a few minutes, there is only few survive from the crash of the bus. “Where are we?” said the woman. “I don’t know. We are in the middle nowhere?” said the man. Suddenly, “Do you have cell phone? Please call the ambulance or police?” said the young man. And Jane still groaning dreadfully ill. “Oh damn it! The cell phone was broken” said the woman. “There is no signal” said the man while holding his phone. Suddenly there is screaming from the deep of jungle, “Ha…. Ha … ha…. Ha….!. The shrieking is getting loud and louder and makes Jane and the rest felt so terrifying. “What is that?” said the young man when he sees the appearance above from the tree and the appearance jump into the next tree. “What are you see it? Ask the young woman. “I don’t know…” said the young man. Suddenly, “Help me!” screaming the old lady whiles her body seizing by the appearance. “Oh… No! Caroline” said the old man. And the creature still holding the Caroline above of tree. In above of tree, “Please don’t kill me! I begging you” said Caroline to the creature imploringly. But, “Ha… ha… ha…. Ha…!” the creature is laughing and the she is throwing the Caroline’s body. “Oh… no! ahhhhhhh…………” screaming of Caroline from above of tree. Then, “Blurk… Kreak… !” sound of the broken bone. “Oh… No! Caroline!” said the old man when he approaching Caroline’s body and the same time the creature is go down. “Sir, it’s still danger! Run! Please hurry up!” said the young man when he sees the creature is go down, “Let me go! I don’t want leave my wife here” said the old man. Suddenly, the creature is scratching out of the old man’s neck and cause of that, the old man is dead beside his wife body and then all of the survivor are running away from the creature, except Jane, she still can’t walk. “Please help me!” said Jane, suddenly the creature staring to Jane and approaching her, “Please don’t kill me” begging Jane to the creature. Then the creature is getting close to Jane. “Oh… God! Please don’t kill me, I begging you” said Jane. And the creature holding the Jane’s belly. And Jane still frightened when the creature is getting close approaching her while holding her belly. Suddenly the creature is crying and also disappears, “Oh… Child!” groaning the creature. After the creature is disappears, a man approaching Jane, “Are you Okay?” said the man to Jane. “I’m alright” said Jane. “Please holding me to walk” said Jane again. “Okay, listen up! We must find another shelter because here… it’s not safe anymore” said the man while holding Jane. Then the survivor walking to find the shelter.

            In the shelter, “What is that?” ask the young girl. “What the creature is it? Ask the young girl again. “She is… Kuntilanak” said Jane. “Kuntilanak is the woman ghost is lost her child after bearing but her child is death and she is also death. “What do you said?” said the young man to Jane. “I think it’s just urban legend, there is no fact about that creature” said the young man. “But, what will us going through this…. This is we are face to our urban legend’s creature” said Jane. Suddenly the creature is screaming, “Ha…. Ha… Ha… Hi…. Hi… Hi… Oh… my child… where is my child… ha… Ha… Ha…!” screaming the Kuntilanak. “Oh… no! she again!” said the young man while he looking around out of shelter. “Don’t let him going to outside…” said Jane but at same time the creature grab the young man’s body, “Oh… No! Help me!!” screaming the young man. “Damn it!” said the man while he try to help. “Oh… no! Billy… “ screaming the young girl. Suddenly, “We must listen she shrieking, far felt near and neat felt far” said Jane. “Who are you? Why you know everything?” ask the young girl. “You shouldn’t ask like that” said the man. “So now you are backing her?!” said the young girl angrily. “Because my father is the man who can handle this creature and I saw it” said Jane. “You mean your father is shaman” said the young girl. Suddenly, “Oh… My God! I got the signal” said the woman. “Make a calling” said the man to the woman which is holding the phone. “Who is we must calling it?” ask the woman. “Ambulance!” said Jane. “Police!” said the Man and “The shaman” said the young girl contemporaneously. “First, we must call the police, ambulance then the shaman” said the man. Then, the woman makes phone call, “Hello? Police station… we got accident. Hello… did you hear me?” said the woman. “Hello…. Yes… you got accident… hey…. Hello…?!“ said the police officer and phone call was snap off. “So?!” ask the man. “I can’t because the signal was snap off. In the police station, “Can you searching where is phone call make calling?” ask police officer to his assistant. “Okay… I got it! In the Selambayung Street. In the street have deep ravine” said the assistant to police officer. “And please calling the ambulance and SAR team!” said the police officer.

           

In the ravine, “We must go out from here “said the man. “No… I don’t want it’s better to us to stay here” said the woman. “Can you walk?” ask the man to Jane. “I try…” said Jane. Suddenly the creature is screaming again. “Ha…. Ha…Ha… Hi… Hi… Hi… Hi…” screaming the creature. “Wait!” said Jane. “What?” said the man. “Far felt near and near felt far” said Jane. “Listen the screaming…” said Jane. Jane and the rest of survivor heard the screaming is near so they are run out from the shelter to the above of ravine. Suddenly, “Stop!” said Jane. Because of the screaming heard so far so their stop and try to find the sheltered the bush. “Oh…. My child! My child….. ha…. Ha…. Ha…. Ha…. Ha… hi…. Hi… hi…!” screaming the creature. But the young girl doesn’t listen what Jane’s advice. The young girl is running and climb up the ravine, then the creature grab the young girl’s body and ripped the young girl’s body into the piece and the blood spilled to the ground. “Everybody stays in position” said the man. Then the creature is disappearing. “Okay, hurry up!” said the man again while the creature is disappearing and continue their climbing up to the ravine. Suddenly, It’s weird?” said Jane. “Why?” ask the man. At the same time the woman holding the phone get the phone call from police officer. “Yeah… Hello?” said the woman while answering the phone call by the police officer. “How many survive is still safe?” ask the police officer. Suddenly, at the same time the creature is appear behind the woman get phone call and then, with saucer eyed and her chest is bleeding with her own blood. And appear one hand from the chest with holding the heart. Seemingly the creature is stabbing from behind of the woman. Cause of that, the phone was she holding it, is falling down and the woman is already death before she answer the question of police officer. And then “Ha…. Ha… ha… ha… ha…. Ha…. Hi…. Hi…. Hi… where is my child” screaming the creature. “Oh… My God!” said Jane. Suddenly the creature jump into the Jane’s position. After that, “Where is my child?” said the creature. “Don’t kill her!” said the man while drubbing the block of wood into the creature’s body but the block of wood is broken then the creature slap to the man until falling down into the tree and unconscious. “Where is my child?!” screaming the creature. “Your child is gone” said Jane. “You liar!” screaming the creature. “Your child is gone a long time ago” said Jane. “I miss my child so much… I love my future husband” said the creature.

            Flashback…. “At the time, we love each other but our love is forbidding love from the both of our parent. Although, we don’t listen our parent interdiction and we still meet each other and the child was our child. Unfortunely, what we are doing is disgraceful to our family. And finally we must separate, I heard my lovely man is dead in the war. And me, I must leave from my hometown and my parent. But… my child wasn’t birth, he died in my stomach. Oh… my poor son” said the creature. During the creature tell her painful memories, Jane grab from her purse a knife, “I’m so sorry to hear that…” said Jane while stick of the knife into the creature’s head. And, “Ahhhhhh………..!” the creature’s groaning.

            After that, Jane is helping up the man was unconscious. “Hey…. Please wake up!” said Jane. Meanwhile Jane is helping up the man, the creature still groaning because the knife is sticking in her head so deep. After that, the man is wake up and both of them continue their climbing up. In the above the ravine, the police, ambulance and SAR team are waiting to searching and helping to Jane and the man who is she helping it. Suddenly, “Ha…. Ha…. Ha…. Ha…. Ha….! I will find you!” shrieking of the creature.

Goosebumps stories part 10: Kuntilanak Deathly Shrieking